Cinematography video task feedback

Teacher feedback:
- Nice pace to the editing - moves along quickly and fits the music (but does the music fit the subject matter) 
- Shots were generally accurate although a couple of errors in labelling
- Establishing shot in the middle, think about sequencing shots 
- The extreme close up framing isn't quite right but seeing it a second time it's very horror - Blair Witch Project 

Class feedback:
WWW- 
Accurate labels, wide range of shots, audio choice fit with the video, clever editing and song choice, most of shots were well framed

EBI-
The lighting was a bit better, if the establishing shot was something else to fit the theme of the video, transition the music at the end 

My feedback:
Generally, I was successful at using a large range of shots along with good editing of video making sure that the song and the pace of video go together. To make the video better I should re consider the sequencing of the shots - for example put the establishing shots in the beginning. Also, I should go back and check the accuracy of the shots and the video for any errors. I will also consider the lighting of the video in order to make it clearer for the audience to watch. 

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