Feedback:
- Good tagline! Title feels less original but with the tagline I think it works
- Mental illness angle is interesting - one you need to be careful with, in terms of representation.
- Good use of terminology and theory and I like your reference to make protagonist suffering from mental illness
- Camerawork a huge strength - great use of terminology and clear technical planning
- Likewise editing and sound - you've clearly thought this through - real confidence and authority to your concept and delivery
- More good planning for mise-en-scene and good recovery from lack of auto advance on previous slide
- Props/self harm possible danger in terms of pre watershed aspect of brief
- Clear thought behind industry and advertising
- Overall, great structure and confident delivery
2) WWW - In terms of presenting my film trailer it was delivered clearly and confidently as well as being well explained covering every possible aspect in the brief. On a whole my plan is pretty secure and I have a good idea of exactly what I want out of my trailer
EBI - To improve my idea I need to now take into consideration the use of mental illness and how I am going to represenet it correctly in my trailer without bringing offence to anyone. I also need to consider the gore element of my trailer as it may not be appropriate pre watershed.
3) My presentation was essentially a summarised plan of my film trailer, explaining my ideas and highlighting the most important aspects of my trailer. After gathering feedback I feel that I need to change my statement of intent and add crucial information surrounding the idea of using mental illness in my film. My narrative overall is strong and has a clear story line using Todorovs theory of equilibrium, disequilibrium and new equilibrium.
EBI - To improve my idea I need to now take into consideration the use of mental illness and how I am going to represenet it correctly in my trailer without bringing offence to anyone. I also need to consider the gore element of my trailer as it may not be appropriate pre watershed.
3) My presentation was essentially a summarised plan of my film trailer, explaining my ideas and highlighting the most important aspects of my trailer. After gathering feedback I feel that I need to change my statement of intent and add crucial information surrounding the idea of using mental illness in my film. My narrative overall is strong and has a clear story line using Todorovs theory of equilibrium, disequilibrium and new equilibrium.
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